My old writing

It is crazy to look back on my old writing and read what I did in 5th grade. I have learned a lot in Ap Lang this year and thank god I do not write like this anymore.

J I’m Trapped In An Aliens Body J

 

Pssssss! The time machine landed with a thump. Every alien screamed, “Howard’s back!

 Howard’s back!” One of the parents said, “Did they cramp your style dude?” Everybody kept asking questions for days! It was just like Howard was famous. Everybody was having a great time when…

CRASH!

Some type of spaceship landed and little red and black things started coming out! The aliens didn’t know what they were or what to do about it. All of the aliens started their cars and took off for cover. Soon those little red and black things were everywhere! Suddenly, Howard had an idea, he got in his time machine and started back down to Earth. He was thinking the only people that could help were Jake and his friends. Howard landed in the woods and quickly got dressed like an earthling. He went to try and find Jake. He was at school, so Howard went to Jake’s house and Jake’s mother was there. Howard explained what happened to Jake’s mother and Jake’s mother said she would help. Meanwhile … at Howard’s planet the little black and red things were everywhere! Howard was hungry so he got into the refrigerator and got some pink stuff that he thought was plods, a drink on his planet. Then 5 minutes later his stomach started hurting so he threw up on the floor and the dog started licking it. Then Jake walked in and Howard said, “Jake there you are I wanted to ask you if you would come to my planet and help me fight the little red and black things that have seemed to take over.”

“NO!”

said Jake. “Please, please, please, please,” said Howard. “All right,” said Jake. Howard asked all of Jakes friends and they said yes. So everybody got onto the time machines and all of the people from Earth had to wear helmets. When they got there, the people from Earth noticed that the little black and red things were just ladybugs and their leader said, “We want to rule this planet and nothing will stop us. Oh no, not the foot!” The people from Earth squished them like a bug!

THE END

By Amanda Wiedemeier

Nightmare Camp

Yes! cried Amanda. Were finally out of school for the whole summer said Valerie. Yeagh said Madi. Bye said Amanda to her friends. Her sister said how was your last day of school. It was great said Amanda. When they got home Amanda went upstairs to play PS2. She was playing and her mom yelled to come downstairs. So Amanda turned off the PS2 and went downstairs. I just signed you up for a week at camp her mom said. Noooooooo yelled Amanda. I already mailed it said Amanda’s mom. You are going on Thursday her mom said. But today is Tuesday! Amanda fainted. Wake up wake up said her mom. What just happened said Amanda? You fainted said her mom. 1 day went past Amanda had to pack. The next day she got on a bus to go to camp. It took 1 hour to get there. When Amanda got there she unpacked her suitcase. Amanda spreaded her sheet over the mattress. There were lots of spiders. Ahhhh! Amanda screamed. What! what! Said her cabin mate named angel. There’s a tarantula in my bed. Step on it said angel. So Amanda stepped on the spider. Then it was time to go to the pool. We had to bring our swimming suite and our beach towel. We had to shower off  before getting in the pool. After they showered they jumped right in. they were having a great time Intel they got shocked by an eel. Ooooooooooooch! They yelled. When they got back they dried off and it was starting to get dark. So they joined the other people for a campfire and all of them were my friends! One of them was Valerie. One of them was Arsema and one of them was Brooke. What are you doing we all said at the same time and so we roasted marshmallows and made smores with them. Then they put the fire out and played a little game of flashlight tag. Then suddenly the flashlights all went out and there was a small sound and it got louder and louder it sounded like he he ha ha it sounded like a ghost so we went into our cabins.